Hello Mr. Morris!
Thank you for the comment! I wasn’t expecting to do to well on the assignment, as I usually panic when voice recording, and stumbled over myself quite a few times. Feel free to share my assignment if you feel it is a good enough example!
Hello Mr. Morris!
A well developed response that outlines Canada’s growing perception as a liberator and peacekeeper globally. Many people attribute Canada’s popularity amongst European powers to their liberation of Europe, which in turn extends to the hospitality that Canadians often receive when travelling abroad. I really appreciate the details here about the consequences to the Netherlands as a whole. My grandfather was caught in the turmoil during this time and has some difficult stories about forging for food after the Nazi occupation. Keep inquiring deeply about the past.
I would love to delve deeper into your fabulous work here, but it is quite difficult for me to read your scans. Do you by chance have a higher quality image? If not, feel free to bring the hard copy to me so I can look at it in tandem with this …
A well crafted and engaging narrative that shows a deep ability to use your research to consider the perspectives of marginalized voices during the War of 1812. I really appreciate your ability to consider both sides in these entries, bringing …
A very creative and engaging discussion of continuity and change between the 18th century and now. I especially admire your ability to make deep connections between the conflicts experienced by often unheard voices. One thing that I take away …
An interesting look at the tactics used on both sides of the War of 1812. You mention that a study of these tactics helps to elucidate the battle as a whole — how did these tactics helps to form Canadian identity, or lead to improvements in Canadian conflicts in the future (cause and consequence), what has stayed the same in Canadian tactics since the War of 1812 and what has changed (continuity and change), and what solid primary and secondary source evidence can you provide to answer these questions? Focus on delving deep into your research, using Wikipedia as a starting point.
A well composed and researched independent investigation. Keep the findings of this work in mind for Social in grade 10, when we will focus in on Canadian identity, and what it means to be a Canadian in contemporary society. As we cannot always…
A concise and well researched independent investigation! I agree that the War of 1812 helped to pave the way for the desire amongst Canadians for a unified national identity (which may be why we are looking at confederation as a class directly after this). You make some very clear connections here, showing an ability to consider continuity and change not just between 1812 and 1867, but but also with topical events in the news today. Keep up the deep research and question asking — an excellent final independent investigation of the year.
Wow! A very thorough and comprehensive discussion of how several significant battles helped to turn the tide in the War of 1812. Your clarity and use of maps is professional and shows a deep understanding of your research. May I use this video as an example in the future? Thank you for making connections to historical perspectives in discussion how this battle helped shape the American National Anthem — bravo!
An engaging narrative tale of what life might have been like for those aboard English naval ships. I really admire the hard work you put into this piece: from the concision of your language, to the synthesis of your research. I think you very successfully answered your independent investigation question by ‘showing,’ rather than ‘telling.’ Keep pushing yourself to take risks with your creative writing — well done!